General Screenshot/Movie Thread (Archive)

@cryptonymous I love the pallette, music and the layouts, Keep it up!

 

The begining is what im talking about, which looks like, when more paths become available. Also in regaurds to the loops, the player could jump in the middle of them, if they wanted to, because they didnt know they were near the end of the level, and get stuck, but if you get rid of that part of code, guess it won't matter.

 

Just finished Rad Ruin's level design.



Opinions?

 

Not bad, The bricks look nice. Just needs a little work with the grass.

Also, I saw a color mismatch at the top of the mountains. Other than that, it's passable.

 

The bright yellow clashes a bit. I reccomend trying to make it slightly darker. Besides that (and cryptonononono's problems) It looks good!

 

The one problem is purple color, that is much bright and the grass need more work, I think you should just use one color(green or orange). But the rest is good.

 

(Copypasted vid from This thread, because I seem to left WAY too many people speechless, lol.)



it's already "completed" by the way.

 

Layout, which was with me and in my hack from the very beginning of S1E2 gets changed to totally new one! Layout & art by Painto maniak. Visual glitches by YouTube.

C&C welcome.

 

I like it. The BG is nice and the layout seems easy but fast which is good for a first level. The only complaint I have is that when you get launched into the air by rolling up that hill the BG gets messed up. I'm sure this is noticed and will be fixed. Apart from that, I like it.

 

The grahical glitches aren't in game. It's messed up by Fusion recorder or YouTube. And thanks :>

 

Improved Rad Ruin's design.

Spoiler

Secret pic :3

I think it looks pretty darn good. Again, Opinions?

 

Pretty nice, but:

- mountains and foreground have purple parts

- grass have wrong shading

- pillars don't match

After 5 minutes of work in MS Paint with his replace color with right-click thingie (IDK how it's named in english, it's for clear area with BG color) I created this:



Althrough it still isn't perfect in pilars, because I wanted to keep your shades.

EDIT: Version with pilars edited:

 

This palette is disoriented, she should start dark finish and clear (not all levels are that way). I made an example of a palette more or less how this should be (with a few varieties):

Edit: Ninja'd again. >_>

 

That was to Lemon or to my edit? I guess that the first, but I'm just curious.

BTW. You have wrong shading in BG grass, Box :> One of ruins color and BG share the same color.

 

@Painto maniak: He said he was ninja'd, so he didn't know about your post.

@DumbLemon: One of those palettes that I can look at. Good!

 

He edited the post when I posted mine, so I didn't knew about the edit.

 

Anyway, speaking of palettesP):

I made this palette a long time ago, so I decided to post it.

 

Better than the original! Nice job!

 

And this will help him improve because? Sorry Ordos, but that's not constructive or helping, for some people that kills motivation, to improve. Now for some constructive criticism, you need to make sure not to use the same colors for the foreground and background, or else things will begin to clash, also stick to one color with different shadings for the grass, and mountains, and what not. I do like the autumn direction you are trying to go with, but it should use other colors than just orange, take this old palette of mine for example, from ARZ.



This should pose as a nice example, since it has grass, and mountains and pillars, sort of like MZ.

Edit: If this doesnt help and you need to look at an MZ palette directly, ill be more than happy to do one.