General Screenshot/Movie Thread

Discussion in 'Showroom' started by redhotsonic, Jul 2, 2015.

  1. LuigiXHero

    LuigiXHero Well-Known Member Member

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    Looks great, loving the revamped music and sound effects. I think two lives is too much of a reward for a single challenge though.
     
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  2. Xernom

    Xernom Well-Known Member Member

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    New zone work in progress...

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  3. B. Casais

    B. Casais Well-Known Member Member

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    Some just little things are left for me to change and I will start working on Green Hill Zone.

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  4. Xernom

    Xernom Well-Known Member Member

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    Bomb Rush Zone featuring a lot of bombs and rings... SMPS made by me.

     
  5. ProjectFM

    ProjectFM Jack of all trades; master in training Member

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    That palette cycle on the blocks in the foreground looks distracting and should be removed, Also, this zone looks very similar to the last zine you showed off, which isn't a good sign. Your work overall seems to be rushed or at least lacks effort. You work looks to me like you drew a couple of simple tiles and decided to fill the screen with them. What is even supposed to be the theme of the zone and what makes it different from other zones? They all look to me like blocky messes.

    With what I've seen of your artwork since you started is that you seem to prefer things looking good than things looking interesting. As a result, your work hasn't really evolved much. I'd much rather see a badly drawn tree than a perfectly drawn geometric shape with little detail. At least that would show that you are trying to improve.

    If there is one thing I like, their the color changing line platforms. They look pretty cool.

    I'm sorry if it seems that I am constantly criticizing you. It's an admirable thing to be able to draw your own levels or right your own music, and I really want to see you use those skills to make something really enjoyable and memorable. If you stick with mediocraty, your work won't be much more influential than if you hadn't done anything at all.

    I really like how things are looking so far. It's interesting to see a factory setting but with lava in it. One thing I would change would be improving the color selection as things seem to be too purple, especially underground. A would also change the grey to a slightly different color (probably something a bit oranger) because I don't think it goes well with purple. Otherwise, good job.
     
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  6. CaveQuest

    CaveQuest Creator and moderator for the telephone projects Member

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    Palette edit for Sonic Nightmare Simulator's Bloodbath Zone, The lava is meant to be blood.
     

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  7. CaveQuest

    CaveQuest Creator and moderator for the telephone projects Member

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    Sorry for double post but got some gameplay here!
     
  8. Xernom

    Xernom Well-Known Member Member

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    Is this artwork more creative and less looking like previous zone?

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  9. KaikeKTH

    KaikeKTH Newcomer Prospect

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    Some images from Sonic 1: Good Future Editions. Basically the opposite from Bad Future Editions. There isn't too much to say about it, i started this hack some days ago, and i really liked the idea, so i started this hack.
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    Green Hill Zone Act 1 - Good Future

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    Sonic x Plant. I Ship it.

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    A Printscreen from Spring Yard - Good Future. Lots of neon on the Foreground and the Background has futuristic towers and glowing windows.

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    A Better printscreen of the Background. Believe it or not, these Red and White windows glows.
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    Is these levels good?
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    Hack OST:
    GHZ: Sonic the Hedgehog - Green Hill Zone - Good Future
    - MZ: Sonic the Hedgehog - Marble Zone - Good Future
    - SLZ: Sonic 1 - Star Light Zone (Good Future Remix)
    - SBZ: Scrap Brain Zone Act 2 Remix - Sonic The Hedgehog
    - SYZ: Tee Lopes - Spring yard zone Re-imagined
    - LZ: Tee Lopes - Labyrinth Zone '12 -
    - Credits: Vriska's Theme
    Also, some Acts will look similar to their present counterparts, but some parts will be different.
     
  10. Unlimited Trees

    Unlimited Trees Producing Trees Since May 9, 1782 Member

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    Mockup.
    I've completely remade UTS1's Egg Plant Zone. I thought it looked like trash before so I decided to completely redesign it.
    Edit: Also the mountains and other stuff also are supposed to move as well, similar to how Sonic 2's Hill Top BG does it
     

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  11. Xeal

    Xeal The Blue Baron Discord Admin

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    This art is fucking great. Keep it up Trees.
     
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  12. KaikeKTH

    KaikeKTH Newcomer Prospect

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    This art is something that we would see on Sonic CD. You should be contracted to work on SEGA.
     
  13. NeoFusionBox

    NeoFusionBox Lost in the armageddon. Member

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    I got some Sonic Crackers vibes on this art. Nice job!
     
  14. Unlimited Trees

    Unlimited Trees Producing Trees Since May 9, 1782 Member

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    Nah. My art is pretty amature-ish, and I've seen way better artwork. There are people who deserve to work at Sega way more than I do.
     
  15. MarkeyJester

    MarkeyJester It takes only one mistake. Member

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    Each and every time I see artwork from you Unlimited Trees, it's always better than the last~

    You are becoming a swell pixel artist! In time, you'll be part of that top 5% of noteable pixel artists, keep it up!
     
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  16. Natsumi

    Natsumi Markey's Member

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    Oh wow that looks fantastic! Much better than last art I've seen from you in fact. I guess you should put something in the sky though, it looks a little empty, some clouds would probably look fancy.
     
  17. KaikeKTH

    KaikeKTH Newcomer Prospect

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    I Think that is cool :v
    Btw, actually i think that everyone draws better than me :'v (*internal screaming of agony*)
    I don't even know how i'm going to do Good Future Star Light and Marble Zone. Future Hill was easy to do, because of Sonic CD, So yeah, everyone is better than me on drawing. Maybe i could get help from someone, but meh, everyone has better things to do.
    When the final version of the hack will be released? Looks pretty cool. :v
     
  18. Swift

    Swift Likes to chuckle Member

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    I've been busy, making my own hack. This special stage, that I've made, is not perfect, but it's alright. It just needs some tweaking to ensure there's no issues or bugs.
     
  19. Unlimited Trees

    Unlimited Trees Producing Trees Since May 9, 1782 Member

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    Another mockup.
    I finished the bottom portion of the background, so I made this lazy mockup (hence why there's no life icon and some of the tiles aren't edited).
    Full background:
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    And there's also even more tiles which are supposed to animate.
     

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  20. ProjectFM

    ProjectFM Jack of all trades; master in training Member

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    When the striped part is sloped, it looks noticably thinner than when it isn't. You should thicken it so it looks more consistant. Also, the shading on the sky looks odd with it being really dark on the top. Unless you can lighten that part, you could add more dithering to smoothly shade it to a less dark tone. Otherwise, that looks great.